Submited on: 02 Oct 2010 02:21:06 PM GMT
Published on: 02 Oct 2010 07:40:11 PM GMT
 

1 Is the subject of the article within the scope of the subject category? Partly
2 Are the interpretations / conclusions sound and justified by the data? Partly
3 Is this a new and original contribution? Yes
4 Does this paper exemplify an awareness of other research on the topic? Yes
5 Are structure and length satisfactory? No
6 Can you suggest brief additions or amendments or an introductory statement that will increase the value of this paper for an international audience? Yes
7 Can you suggest any reductions in the paper, or deletions of parts? No
8 Is the quality of the diction satisfactory? No
9 Are the illustrations and tables necessary and acceptable? Yes
10 Are the references adequate and are they all necessary? Yes
11 Are the keywords and abstract or summary informative? No
  • Other Comments:

    This manuscript is good, but it should be correct.

    Change your keywords,  jaundice, cirrhosis

    Correct these references 'Pokorny M.[Favorable effect of jaundice on bronchial asthma]Cas Lek Cesk1952;91:1123-6. Czech.' 'Cainzos M,Potel J,Puent JL.Anergy in jaundiced patients.Br J Surg 1988;75:147-9' and any other same mistake. For example, Correct this word 'Cinzos'

    Why hyperbilirubinemia lasted about four-five months?

    How long have they had hyperbilirubinemia?

     

  • Invited by the author to review this article? :
    Yes
  • Have you previously published on this or a similar topic?:
    No
  • References:
    None
  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:

    I have some manuscript about obstructive jaundice.

    Celebi F, Yılmaz İ, Aksoy H, Gumus M, Taysi S, Ören D. Dehidroepiandrosterone prevents oxidative injury in obstructive jaundice in rats. J Int Med Res. 2004;32: 400-5.

    Gümüş M, Celebi F, Böyük A, Gürsan N, Akçay F. Dehydroepiandrosterone ameliorates hepatocellular damage in obstructive jaundice. Cell Biochem Funct. 2010 Aug;28(6):515-20.

    Gumus M, Yüksel H, Kapan M, Böyük A, Önder A, Aldemir M. Effects of Ellagic Acid on Copper, Zinc and Biochemical Values in Serum and Liver of Experimental Cholestatic Rats Biological Trace Element Research DOI: 10.1007/s12011-010-8863-2

  • How to cite:  G M .A familiar case of progressive relief of seasonal allergy-like symptoms during jaundice [Review of the article 'A familiar case of progressive relief of seasonal allergy-like symptoms during jaundice ' by Bakiri A].WebmedCentral 2011;2(2):WMCRW00488
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