Submited on: 15 Nov 2011 04:02:01 PM GMT
Published on: 16 Nov 2011 06:31:55 AM GMT
 
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Posted by Dr. Sujit K Tripathy on 20 Nov 2011 02:56:25 PM GMT

1 Is the subject of the article within the scope of the subject category? Yes
2 Are the interpretations / conclusions sound and justified by the data? No
3 Is this a new and original contribution? No
4 Does this paper exemplify an awareness of other research on the topic? No
5 Are structure and length satisfactory? No
6 Can you suggest brief additions or amendments or an introductory statement that will increase the value of this paper for an international audience? No
7 Can you suggest any reductions in the paper, or deletions of parts? Yes
8 Is the quality of the diction satisfactory? No
9 Are the illustrations and tables necessary and acceptable? No
10 Are the references adequate and are they all necessary? No
11 Are the keywords and abstract or summary informative? No
  • Other Comments:

    Dear authors,

                      An excellent topic for discussion, but unfortunately not enough informations are given in this article. The article should be properly fragmented into different sections to make it clear and more informative. I am giving few headings under the domain of which you can write it in detail. 1. introduction: why trauma mangement is so important in a developing country? what are the deficiencies? justify your answer with proper references 2. What is essential in early trauma care? mention about prehospital care, emergency and definite mangement...give examples of western literature...3. Whats the current situation indeveloping countries? mention your own experience. 4. how it can be made better? write from minor cahnges to major advancements that you think necessary. 5. mention about supports/ departments activity that you need for that. also mention how sever trauma can be prevented for example, wearing seat belt, helmet, avoidance of alcohol while driving etc.. you can give examples of Ghana and nigeria...how they have implemeted several RTA prevention activities...mention about helpline number, ambulance services that Govt should provide every 2-3 kms distance on national highways, trauma centers etc...then helicaptor services...

        Give more refernces and write about them in your article..

    A good written article will be more beneficial and attractive for the readers.

    Good luck.

    Dr Sujit Kumar Tripathy

  • Competing interests:
    No
  • Invited by the author to review this article? :
    No
  • Have you previously published on this or a similar topic?:
    No
  • References:
    None
  • Experience and credentials in the specific area of science:

    Good

  • How to cite:  Tripathy S K.Review on [Review of the article 'Definitive Care for Trauma Patients in a Developing Nation ' by Karim T].WebmedCentral 2011;2(11):WMCRW001148
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