Is the subject of the article within the scope of the subject category?
Yes
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Are the interpretations / conclusions sound and justified by the data?
Partly
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Is this a new and original contribution?
Yes
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Does this paper exemplify an awareness of other research on the topic?
Yes
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Are structure and length satisfactory?
Yes
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Can you suggest brief additions or amendments or an introductory statement that will increase the value of this paper for an international audience?
No
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Can you suggest any reductions in the paper, or deletions of parts?
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Is the quality of the diction satisfactory?
No
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Are the illustrations and tables necessary and acceptable?
Yes
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Are the references adequate and are they all necessary?
Yes
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Are the keywords and abstract or summary informative?
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Other Comments:
This is a survey-based study of the health effects of smoking in Jhansi, India. The researchers found that that smokers had higher rates of self-reported illness in all evaluated systems, with the greatest differences in cardiovascular and respiratory disease. Smokers were counseled regarding smoking cessation and re-surveyed one year later. The authors state 60% agreed to stop smoking; self-reported illness was lower in all systems one year after counseling.
There are multiple weaknesses in this study and paper.
- Most noteably, the grammer is very poor which makes it difficult to understand many sentences.
- The authors did not report the length of time that individuals had smoked, nor the amount smoked (such as pack-years).
- The actual number of smokers who quit smoking during the one year followup is not reported.
- The authors claim that there is a link between literacy and understanding the health risks of smoking, but do not report any data to support this claim.
- Data in Illustrations 2 & 3 would be better represented with bar graphs rather than line charts.
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Medical Director, Public Health - Dayton & Montgomery County
How to cite: Herchline T .Illness among smokers in Jhansi, India[Review of the article 'Respiratory, Cardio-vascular and other Physiological System Associated Illness Among Smokers and Revitalizing Effect of No Smoking: A Human Health Risk Assessment & Management Study at Jhansi, Uttar Pradesh, India ' by Singh R].WebmedCentral 2011;2(11):WMCRW001130
This is a survey-based study of the health effects of smoking in Jhansi, India. The researchers found that that smokers had higher rates of self-reported illness in all evaluated systems, with the greatest differences in cardiovascular and respiratory disease. Smokers were counseled regarding smoking cessation and re-surveyed one year later. The authors state 60% agreed to stop smoking; self-reported illness was lower in all systems one year after counseling.
There are multiple weaknesses in this study and paper.
- Most noteably, the grammer is very poor which makes it difficult to understand many sentences.
- The authors did not report the length of time that individuals had smoked, nor the amount smoked (such as pack-years).
- The actual number of smokers who quit smoking during the one year followup is not reported.
- The authors claim that there is a link between literacy and understanding the health risks of smoking, but do not report any data to support this claim.
- Data in Illustrations 2 & 3 would be better represented with bar graphs rather than line charts.
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Medical Director, Public Health - Dayton & Montgomery County